Online +

[TheFallenOne]

One story comes to an end, while another rises from its ashes.

The Game(from a different site) has been a good story since I started it, but it has some flaws and I have a lot of major improvements for it. So I am creating a new version of it called "Online +" (Credit goes to Eebit for the title). It will have a new storyline, new characters, new pokemon, and new everything.

Enough with me talking. Here is the prologue. (Which I think I could improve :I)

[align=center][size=large][b]Prologue[/b][/size][/align]

In this world, new things are being created everyday to keep up with the growth of mankind. Mankind has been growing since the beginning of time and shall always grow from now until the end of mankind. The growth shall be the end of mankind itself.

As the sun finally rose into the horizon bringing light into the building, a tall man in a black business suit was walking into a long hallway. The man had messy black hair and was wearing black sunglasses to hide his eyes. He stopped in front of a large red door and put his on the doorknob. He opened the door and saw a large room with a long black table with 7 seats. Of the seven seats, 6 of them were occupied. The man that had just entered walked to the seat near a large screen and put a brief case on top of the table.

“Good morning class!” The man greeted with a grin. “My name is Mr. X and today I will be showing you my project.” The man opened his brief case letting a bunch of papers fly across the room landing in front of the other people in the room. “Here is all of the statistics of my project.”

The man opposite of Mr. X let out a chuckle at Mr. X’s entrance. On his suit he had a nametag that said “Brown”. He read the papers in front of him and his expression soon turned to a disbelieving frown. “What the hell is this?” Brown asked Mr. X with a demanding shout. “This can’t be real! I thought this project was cancelled years ago!”

“Well you are wrong Mr. Brown,” Mr. X replied to his troubled acquaintance. “This project is way better than that piece of trash in a toilet. It will be the beginning of a new era!”

Mr. X grabbed a small device from his pocket and slid it to the center of the table. He brought out a remote and pressed a black button. From the device on the table, a large virtual globe appeared in front of the group of men. All of the men in the room, except Mr. X, stood up and stared at the globe. Brown stared at it for a while and then glared at Mr. X. Mr. X pressed another button making a virtual battle between two creatures to appear next to the globe. The first creature had a large humanoid figure, but had a purple body and its eyes were a dark red. The other creature was on all four limbs and was also purple, but it had a horn sticking out of its forehead unlike the former.

“So you actually did it,” Brown sighed as he sat back down on his chair. “You created the game that he failed to create.” He looked at Mr. X and glared at him yet again. “As President of this company, I hereby give you permission to create this game, but I have one question. What is it called?”

Mr. X smiled as Brown asked him the said question. “This game goes by many names,” Mr. X stated. “But of all the names I chose the one that I thought was the best. The name of it is…” Mr. X jumped on top of the table and took out of his sunglasses revealing his dark blue eyes. “The World.”

Since it is a new story that means there will be a sign up, since the old characters from The Game, sadly won't be returning. PM me the submissions.

[b]Character’s Name:[/b] (irl not in “The World”)
[b]The World Name:[/b] (self-explanatory)
[b]Age:[/b]
[b]Gender:[/b]
[b]Appearance:[/b] (IRL appearance. Can be description or Image)
[b]Personality:[/b] (self-explanatory again)
[b]Pokemon:[/b] (The Pokemon your character becomes when he enters “The World”)
[b]Accessories:[/b] (Eg. Hat, glasses, etc.)
[b]Moves:[/b] (In this story your character gets a list of moves just like the video game, but they are limited to 6 moves. At least four of them must be real moves. If they are original please give a description of the move,)
[b]Backstory:[/b] (History of the character, Optional.)

Expect the first chapter to appear in a couple days.

[Eebit]

As I'm sure I have said elsewhere, this looks good! I'm excited to see where this goes in the future... Though, unfortunately I don't have any signups for you at the moment. Looking forward to reading more! :)

[-J-]

I'm not quite sure on signups either right now, but I gotta say that this does look EXCELLENT Fallen, from what I can tell! I'm not too familiar with the original "Game", though I'm sure it was every bit as awesome. I thoroughly enjoyed this and look forward to much more from you.

[Fuzzydude]

pokeemawn = snivy

vantvantVANT.

I'll sign up!

[TheFallenOne]

Thanks for the comments guys. Well on Acanthite(that pokemon forum Eebit call "lolacanthite") The Game was a pretty good story and was actually in the Top 5 most viewed fan fictions there. I am still shocked about that still XD

Well I'm working on Chapter 1 in my spare time, but it might not be done in a while since I am very busy this week.